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以下励学个性化为大家整理了一篇托福写作高分范文指导建议，希望对大家的备考有所帮助。

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to xx(ex:people's success) as xx(ex: education).Despite various responses people may have on the topic that xx( ex:which thing should the education aim at).I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that xx(ex:preparing for careers should have primary consideration.)

Asked what...will do to ..., some xx(ex: teachers) may answer: xx. Admittedly, xx plays a vital part in xx(ex: person’s success and happiness).But actually, I think that...

适用于agree or disagree的问题 。

Adj(Marvelous) as it looks at first sight, xx(ex：modern technology) does not xx(ex:help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency ) in most cases; or it could work towards the opposite direction which led xx(ex:students to lose their initiative to learn and explore.)

一上来直接问题的转述：xxxx(ex：Can we know a person through the types of friends he has)?

当然，可以转述为 Asked whether xxx,

Different people will give different answers to this question from their own characters, emotional concerns and even educational backgrounds. However, when it comes to me, I firmly believe that...

这个适用于所有问题。观点对比型(live in small town or live in big city?)

甚至来个简单的， I support the idea that...

以上都、最后一句来一个：

+To better illustrate my point of view, I list several reasons as follows.

中间部分：

支持段落1：To begin with, .... 中间需要举例一下：For instance，

支持段落2：Furthermore, ... 中间有需要的话再举例一下 There is no better illustration than the example of...

支持段落3,：没有让步段落了就 Last but not the least, 有让步段落就 In addition,...

让步段落：Admittedly, Granted, I tend to agree(concede) that: in some cases(conditions), it may be true that....These cases, however, are rare and therefore are too weak to convince me to walk away from my position .

 (When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…… ) I still firmly believe that.

结尾：

All in all, for the reasons listed above, we can safely conclude that...

延伸阅读：

托福写作高分语法——分词结构

托福写作高分语法——主语从句

托福写作高分句型——表示原因

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